Wednesday, May 09, 2012

Lugar's Defeat and Negative Campaigning

Yes, Dick Lugar was old. Yes, he'd lost touch with Indiana. Yes, he's anything but a small-government Tea Party type. But let's not forget one other factor contributing to his resounding defeat in the Republican senatorial primary: the way he and his allies conducted the campaign.

I moved to Indiana in 1989, and for all the years since, until a couple of months ago, Lugar had a rare reputation as a statesman and a gentleman. Some of his positions and decisions could legitimately be described as insufficiently conservative for the current political climate, but he could have found ways to remind voters of his accomplishments. Instead, almost all we saw, ad nauseum, were heavy-footed, disingenuous attack ads. You know the kind -- where the same old voice actors use the same melodramatic phrasing. To put it mildly, it does not encourage me to vote for a candidate when that candidate assumes I mindlessly respond to ominous tones and nasty adjectives. And the ads kept coming, even after their distortions were exposed.

We're all used to this approach by now, and it may not be feasible to penalize every candidate who indulges in it, short of plugging our ears and refusing to vote. But when a candidate who should know better and is assumed to know better stoops to this kind of campaign, we can hold him accountable. And we did. I've been reading the recaps, and it's clear I'm not the only one who found the tactics of Lugar et al. offensive as well as surprising.

I have my concerns about Indiana losing the benefits of Lugar's connections and seniority. My husband works at Crane, and I think it likely that Lugar has been protecting Crane effectively and would continue to do so. (FWIW, I firmly believe it's worth protecting. Crane does a great deal of valuable and high-quality work, the giggle potential of a naval base in Indiana notwithstanding.) I don't know whether Mourdock -- or, for that matter, Donnelly -- can provide comparable protection. But not only am I a small-government Independent with tea party sympathies, but I could not bring myself to reward Lugar for diving into the slime pit.

Retire in peace, Senator. I'm sorry you left this way.

Wednesday, May 02, 2012

Common Sense 101: Tailgating

Look, I get it. I do. Impatient is my middle name -- or would be, if my parents had had the chance to get to know me ahead of time. When the driver ahead of you is moving too slow, it's natural to want to noodge them into speeding up by pressing on their automotive space bubble. BUT . . . you really know better. You do. Don't you?

Well, just in case you don't:

(a) Tailgating Is Dangerous. Your vehicle looming in my rear view mirror distracts me. When you distract me, I'm less likely to react in time when something changes up ahead. And maybe I crash into the deer or bicyclist or car or toddler, and then you crash into me.

Not good enough? Well, try this one:

(b) Tailgating Is Counterproductive (at least, when you tailgate a careful driver). When I see you driving up close to my rear, I don't speed up. I slow down. And I'm not doing it to frustrate you -- at least, not primarily. The less room I have behind me, the more room I'll need in front of me. If I see an obstacle up ahead, and I slam on the brakes with you right behind me, you'll slam into me. The slower I'm moving, the more time I have to brake gradually before I reach the obstacle.

And if I slow down, you'll have to slow down. (Or pass me. PLEASE. But you could've done that without tailgating me first.)

So take a deep breath, and BACK OFF.

Sunday, April 22, 2012

Twilight, Fifty Shades, and Copyright Law

Part of the continuing Internet conversation about E.L. James' Fifty Shades trilogy concerns its degree of similarity to its original fanfic version, Master of the Universe. See, e.g., However, this should be only the starting point of any inquiry about the appropriateness and legality of Fifty Shades' publication. What matters – legally and perhaps ethically -- is how similar Fifty Shades is to the Twilight saga that inspired it, and whether it has attributes that should protect it from any legal action, similar or no.

Stephenie Meyer's Twilight, of course, involves the overwhelming attraction between Edward Cullen, a young (in appearance), devastatingly handsome, rich vampire, and Bella Swan, a human teenage girl. While Edward and his (adoptive) family have forsworn consumption of human blood, it still tempts him, and this particular girl's blood is the most tempting of all. Over the course of the four books, the couple face various perils and crises, and their relationship reaches certain key milestones. James' original fanfic, Master of the Universe, retained the names of Edward, Bella and various other characters, and used many of the same plot points, but eschewed the supernatural entirely. It's difficult to say more without spoilers (which I'll keep to a minimum until the end of this piece), but Edward in particular -- while just as handsome as before, and possibly even richer -- acquired a compelling and psychologically plausible back story, and confronted Bella with a very different sort of danger. James also added a whole lot of sex, both "vanilla" and kinkier varieties.

The characters and plot of Master of the Universe were sufficiently different from Twilight that the retention of the original character names at times seemed forced or inappropriate. When Master of the Universe became Fifty Shades of Grey, the Twilight-derived names were mercifully abandoned.

And now, with Fifty Shades secretly stashed on innumerable Kindles, Nooks, and iPads, and more and more women sidling into Barnes & Nobles nationwide and asking whether they carry the print version, it seems likely that lawyers for Stephenie Meyer, her publisher, and/or James' publisher have been reviewing some basic principles of copyright law and how those principles are usually applied.

17 U.S. C. §§ 101 et seq. governs copyright in the United States. (I'm not going to clutter this account with citations to particular sections, or to cases applying them -- but please feel free to ask for such citations in the comments.) Basic oversimplified overview: the author of an artistic work owns the copyright from the moment of the work's creation, assuming it's in fact an original work and the author hasn't contracted away his/her copyright. The owner of the copyright has exclusive control of the work (unless and until s/he contracts away certain rights). Copyright doesn't cover ideas, such as "the idea of hunting a formidable whale at the lead of an eccentric captain" (an example used in one federal case), or, closer to home, a rich handsome fellow with a scary secret falling in love with an inexperienced young woman. Rather, it protects the particular expression of an idea. The dividing line between an idea and the expression of an idea can be elusive.

The copyright owner has the exclusive right to prepare or authorize preparation of "derivative works" (those based on or adapted from pre-existing works). If anyone puts out an unauthorized derivative work, or otherwise infringes a copyright, the copyright owner can get a court to enjoin (prohibit) the offending work's publication, distribution, etc., and to order impoundment (seizure) of all copies and any plates, etc. used to produce them. The statute hasn't been revised to reflect POD or ebook publishing, but presumably, any impoundment order nowadays would include some appropriate measures to prevent the use of digital files.

The copyright owner can also sue for damages. S/he has the choice of asking for the infringer's entire profit from the derivative work, plus any damages s/he has suffered from the work's publication, or of receiving preset amounts set forth in the statute (the exact amount to depend on various factors as weighed by the trial court).

Case law (court decisions, in this case federal court decisions and particularly those of the Circuit Courts of Appeal and the U.S. Supreme Court) adds some wrinkles.

To prove copyright infringement, you have to start by proving that the copyright work was -- copied. You do that by proving (1) access and (2) "substantial similarity" between the original work and the work alleged to violate the original's copyright. The defendant (the one being sued) can still get out from under by proving that s/he created the work independently, without any reliance on the copyrighted work. (This makes copyrights different from trademarks: if someone has a trademark, you can't use the same brand name or logo or whatever, even if you thought of it in a public place, shouted "Eureka!" at the top of your lungs, and described it on the spot in excited detail.) Given the history of Fifty Shades, there's no question that Ms. James had access to the Twilight saga, and no claim that she dreamed it up independently. There is, however, room for debate about its "substantial similarity" to Twilight. This question gets tangled up with some related issues: the "fair use" exception and the idea of a "transformative" work.

There are various tests for "substantial similarity." One is "literal similarity," the verbatim copying or paraphrasing of the original work. The other kind of similarity is "nonliteral" similarity, most important if there is "comprehensive nonliteral similarity," where "the fundamental essence or structure of one work is duplicated in another." Some courts default to relying on that mythic figure, the "reasonable observer," and ask whether that admirable arbiter would find the works, as a whole, substantially similar.

There's very little verbatim copying of Twilight in Fifty Shades (with the exception of the overused adjective "mercurial" and countless descriptions of Edward's and Christian's hair). Nor did I notice Fifty Shades paraphrasing a great deal of Twilight's text. There are, however, many similarities between Fifty Shades and the Twilight saga. While defining a plot point or character trait is an intrinsically fuzzy and subjective matter, I counted possibly thirty or more parallels of plot or character. Some are central, some unimportant, and some important in Twilight and unimportant in Fifty Shades (e.g. the couple's appreciation of how the other smells). The POV of the two works is similar: Bella narrates the Twilight series, except for one sizable chunk of Breaking Dawn, and Ana's is almost the only viewpoint in Fifty Shades. (There is, however, a difference in tense: Bella's tale is told in past, Ana's in present.) While one cannot copyright a single idea, the doctrine of "comprehensive nonliteral similarity" suggests that at some point, a series of ideas becomes copyrightable material. It would take time I'm not willing to spend (since nobody's publisher is paying me) to research where and how consistently previous cases have drawn that line.

A finding of substantial similarity would not end the legal inquiry. The "fair use" of a copyrighted work isn't an infringement. Whether a use is "fair use" depends on a few factors, similarity being only one of them:

"(1) the purpose and character of the use, including whether such use is of a commercial nature or is for nonprofit educational purposes; "(2) the nature of the copyrighted work; "(3) the amount and substantiality of the portion used in relation to the copyrighted work as a whole; and "(4) the effect of the use upon the potential market for or value of the copyrighted work."

Fifty Shades is a massively commercial use of a work whose nature is equally commercial. No basis for finding fair use there. The language of subparagraph (3), with its reference to a "portion" used, seems to concern verbatim copying -- so Fifty Shades doesn't take a hit there. What of subparagraph (4)?

Twilight was a cultural phenomenon. Fifty Shades may turn out to be another: sales have been stratospheric, and the series has generated a great deal of discussion, head-scratching, hand-wringing, etc. As someone who's read and enjoyed both, I don't believe that the success of Fifty Shades is in any way harmful to Twilight's future commercial prospects. I suspect the truth is just the opposite: that many readers of each series will seek out the other. Twilight, while classified as YA romance, has appealed to a great many mature women. These readers, hearing of a series with roots in Twilight but featuring adult characters and plenty of steamy scenes, may well be intrigued. More to the point, readers who appreciate Fifty Shades at least as much for its compelling characters and romantic world view as for its kinky sex scenes -- and I'd bet there are many such readers -- may well decide that Twilight is worth a look-see. Neither scenario deprives Stephenie Meyer or her publishers of any revenue, and the latter would provide some.

There is one aspect of the notion of "fair use" that comes from case law, rather than from the copyright statute: the notion of a "transformative" use. As one case put it, a "transformative" use "adds something new, with a further purpose or different character, altering the first with new . . . meaning, or message. . . . [T]he goal of copyright, to promote science and the arts, is generally furthered by the creation of transformative works. Such transformative works thus lie at the heart of the fair use doctrine's guarantee of breathing space." An oft-cited commentator put it this way: "[if] the secondary use adds value to the original -- if [the original work] is used as raw material, transformed in the creation of new information, new aesthetics, new insights and understandings -- this is the very type of activity that the fair use doctrine intends to protect for the enrichment of society."

There is at least one group, the Organization for Transformative Works, pushing for the recognition of fanfiction in general as meeting this definition and thus falling within the "fair use" exception. Without taking a position on that broad question, I submit that the Fifty Shades trilogy is in fact a "transformative" use of its Twilight source material.

WARNING: SPOILERS (though rather vague and general ones) AHEAD.

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In arguing for Fifty Shades as a protected transformative work, I am not talking about its addition of heaping portions of sex. If Fifty Shades were simply Twilight plus sex and/or kink, the way Pride and Prejudice and Zombies is simply Pride and Prejudice plus the undead, then I would consider it exactly the sort of derivative work that an author should have the right to veto. It is the changes James has made to the essence of the story that lead me to defend her right to publish.

Instead of a supernatural romance set against a backdrop of vampire factions and werewolves, we have a thoroughly human love story. Instead of drawn-out suspense about whether Bella will embrace the advantages and disadvantages of bloodthirsty immortality, we have Christian's struggle to overcome his hideously traumatic past, move beyond his carefully maintained defenses, and allow himself to love and be loved. Both series are page-turners, and each relies for part of its suspense on external threats, but in Fifty Shades, the more deeply felt suspense concerns the nature of Christian's and Ana's relationship, and Christian's struggle with his inner demons. One sympathizes with and roots for Edward and Bella; but the reader's feeling for Christian is far closer to Aristotle's "pity and fear." For Aristotle, it was tragic drama that evoked these emotions, and Christian's tragic past is always lurking, threatening to destroy his and Ana's happy ending.

Fifty Shades, despite some amateurish touches and occasional poor editing, is a worthwhile addition to our collective store of stories. Its legal status is unclear. All in all, I hope that Stephenie Meyer, or whoever else has the power to decide whether to drag Ms. James into court, decides to refrain.

Thursday, April 12, 2012

Review -- Fifty Shades trilogy

A Facebook friend recently asked whether anyone would admit to having read Fifty Shades of Grey by E.L. James. I decided to own up in dramatic fashion by posting a review of the entire Fifty Shades trilogy. I'll start by disclosing two possibly pertinent background facts:

    (a) I have little experience with the erotic romance genre or the BDSM sub-genre. Before this series, I had read only Roni Loren's Crash Into You -- which I recommend for its intriguing and likable characters, as well as its steamy interludes.

    (b) I have read, enjoyed and reread Stephenie Meyer's Twilight saga, from which a previous version of Fifty Shades was originally derived. (Sneer if you will: I'll hide behind my B.A. with Distinction in English and American Literature.) (Never mind how many decades have elapsed since then.)

In this fanfic turned stand-alone series, alternate Edward and alternate Bella have become Christian Grey, smoldering young billionaire, and Anastasia Steele, a shy, awkward and inexperienced lover of literature, about to graduate from college as the first book begins. Like his vampire inspiration, Christian has an alarming secret -- and like Bella, Anastasia (Ana) is powerfully drawn to the attractive, complex and charismatic stranger.

The story is told entirely from Ana's POV -- and her choice of words is fairly demure and euphemistic, with the notable exception of "f*ck." (We hear a good deal of this one word from Christian as well, occasionally in quaint phrases like "kinky f*ckery.") This relatively mild language lowers the entry barrier for those of us who aren't used to the liberal use of blunt sexual terminology in our reading.

It's debatable whether this series properly belongs in the BDSM category at all. It presents, at least, an interesting twist on that sub-genre: one that will draw some people in who might otherwise hesitate, while upsetting some readers used to the more standard fare. (To be more specific would require spoilers, but it's easy to find out what I'm talking about, or rather, not talking about.)

The ratio of sex to plot may be typical for the genre and would be absurd outside it. That said, the plot has its interest. (There is one particularly effective plot point in the third book, recalling a key event in the first book with a nice reflective twist.) While relying in part on the plot of the Twilight saga, James alters it sufficiently to avoid boring a reader familiar with that work. In fact, she does a nice job of translating some of the supernatural elements of the Twilight plot into human motivations and responses. (As an author, I can imagine the chuckles of satisfaction with which she may have greeted some of these inspirations.) It's no surprise that Christian and Ana are derived from Edward and Bella, but they are fully realized and independent characters, capable of change and growth. Christian's personality and back story are particularly compelling.

The remaining traces of Twilight (and there are quite a few) are a pleasant extra for fans of that series -- an extended literary allusion, or an inside joke -- but are well integrated into their new context, and should not pose any problem for those uninterested in the Twilight series.

Christian and Ana exchange quite a few emails -- and these exchanges were perhaps my favorite part of the books. In email, they meet as equals, communicating more freely than in person and sparring with a good deal of wit. I also enjoyed Ana's constant inner companions, her "subconscious" (often, but not always, a critical killjoy) and her "inner goddess" (an energetic, reckless and irreverent enthusiast).

There are failures of editing, particularly in the second book. The sex scenes become quite redundant, with the same or very similar phrases being used in one after another. But for me at least, my interest in the plot and the characters allowed me to overlook these flaws.

Monday, April 09, 2012

Spring in a (Virtual) Bottle

It's the essence of Spring today in Bloomington, Indiana, and lovely enough to make the heart ache. Almost balmy; bird song on the breeze; pure blue sky; new leaves in innumerable fresh shades of green; lilacs and dogwood in bloom.

With dystopian fiction so much the fashion, I imagine the inhabitants of some bleak post-apocalyptic future, comforting or tormenting themselves with full-immersion recorded memories of better days gone by. Today is a day they would choose: to walk in the wind, surrounded by color, listening to the birds.

Thursday, March 22, 2012

What the Founding Fathers would have thought of Wickard v. Filburn

As the time draws near for the U.S. Supreme court to wade into the murky depths of Obamacare, much of the informed discussion touches on a precedent seventy years old, Wickard v. Filburn. This case, the high water mark (to date) of federal regulation of commercial activity, grew out of Depression era wage and price controls. Farmer Roscoe Filburn grew wheat for use on his own farm. He grew more wheat than the federal regulations allowed, so he was ordered to destroy his crop -- perfectly good wheat -- and pay a fine. The alleged authority for this order: Article I, Section 8 of the U.S. Constitution, which states that "[t]he Congress shall have Power . . . to regulate commerce with foreign Nations, and among the several States, and with the Indiana tribes."

A bit of background: our federal government, believe it or not, is supposed to be a government of explicitly delineated limited powers. The default, as it were, is: "The federal government can't do that." Congress may only legislate to carry out one of the powers listed in the Constitution. It may pass laws necessary to the exercise of one of those powers, so long as the law is also "proper" -- appropriate -- for Congressional action (i.e., doesn't violate any rights or other constitutional provisions).

Back to Roscoe Filburn. He wasn't selling wheat across state lines. He wasn't selling it at all. He was growing it to feed his chickens, or whatever. Where did Congress get the authority to tell him how much wheat he could grow for his own use?

Well, the Court held, because ol' Roscoe grew so much wheat, he didn't have to buy any. And because he didn't have to buy wheat to feed his chickens, that reduced the demand for chicken feed. And when he and other farmers met their own needs and reduced demand, that affected the price of wheat. And people sell wheat across state lines. So . . . burn that wheat, buddy!

Now back to Obamacare. As the New York Times recently explained, the folks defending Obamacare say Wickard v. Filburn shows that the feds can make anyone do just about anything as long as there's some connection to interstate commerce. The opposing view: that as much as the case stretched the boundaries of the Commerce Clause, it at least approved regulation of activity, rather than imposing a penalty on inactivity.

Well, we can stare into lamb entrails (or should it be chicken gizzards?) and try to predict how the Supreme Court will apply Wickard v. Filburn to Obamacare. But for a moment, let's indulge in the pleasant fantasy that the Court will instead pull up its collective suspenders and do what it should have done every year since 1942: show some respect for the U.S. Constitution and overrule Wickard v. Filburn.

Can anyone seriously believe for a moment that the revolutionaries who founded this nation, who fought for freedom from monarchic authority and established an elaborate system of checks and balances to restrain government power, intended the central government to be able to interfere in the daily doings of Americans in this manner?

If George III had insisted colonists destroy their own wheat and pay a penalty for growing it, you can bet your Liberty Bell that the "Injuries and Usurpations" detailed in the Declaration of Independence would have included something like this:

"He has dared to penalize the self-reliance and honest Industry of our Citizens, by demanding the Wanton Destruction of grain grown to feed their own livestock, and further imposing financial Penalties for the production of such grain, because his preferred Merchants have thereby lost the Opportunity to extort exorbitant prices for the grain in their own Stores."

And can you picture Benjamin Franklin asking James Madison: "James, as to that provision according Congress the power to 'regulate Commerce . . . among the several States': might that allow Congress to order a farmer to limit his grain harvest, so that he will need to buy more wheat, which will in some small measure affect the price of any wheat sold across the boundary between one state and another?"

Would not Madison have replied, "Benjamin, have you been smoking General Washington's hemp again?"

And as for the notion that those poor simpletons the Founding Fathers didn't really understand economics and political systems nearly as well as our current crop of politicians . . . need I say more?

The debate over Obamacare has shown us that Wickard v. Filburn serves as an invitation to ever more ambitious departures from the principles of limited government. Please, ladies and gentlemen, honorable Justices: do the right thing. Overrule this perverse precedent. You'll sleep better. And maybe Benjamin Franklin, James Madison et al. can rest in peace.

Wednesday, February 29, 2012

Cover possibilities -- comments, please!



Here are two slightly different takes on a cover for my WIP, Reflections. I suspect the ideal cover would be somewhere in between, as far as the text goes. (Photo is by Nick Carver.) Comments??

Friday, February 17, 2012

Sneak Peek at a passage from WIP

Thought I'd let folks get a look at just a bit of the novel I'm editing, tentatively titled Reflections. As it's still a draft, the wording may end up changing slightly.

This is the first time that Sarah and Jack meet. (They become the parents and grandparents of Eleanor and Cassidy respectively. All are important characters, but Eleanor and Cassidy are closer to being the "main" characters.)

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Sarah stood on a slab of golden rock. A few yards from her feet, the rock fell away in a cliff that cut back toward her, as if she were standing on the deck of an enormous ship. Overhead was an intensely blue sky full of puffy white clouds. It was hot, but not humid, at least not for a girl from Toledo. She looked across Kings Canyon to the sheer red rock of the opposite wall. It had been a good, invigorating hike. She was glad she had outdistanced the tourists behind her on the trail, moaning about sore knees and thirst. Even the occasional Australian accent did not make it worthwhile listening to that sort of thing. She leaned her head back and closed her eyes, soaking in the sunshine.


She heard footsteps on the rock, off to her left, and then heard them stop. She looked left and saw a man. He was tall and broad-chested, with muscular legs -- now that's what a hiking partner should look like! -- and coarse black hair. The hair, and the man's khaki-colored T-shirt, were soaked with sweat, but the man showed no discomfort. At the moment, indeed, he looked positively joyful. He was staring at her. When she raised her eyebrows, he blushed.

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Jack stared at the girl with the long red hair. The girl looked as if hiking up a mountain was trivial, a warm-up. She looked ready for anything. She radiated energy, vibrated with it. Jack could imagine her hacking through a jungle, or grasping a handhold and reaching down to help a companion up a cliff. He could go anywhere, do anything, with a girl like that.

She seemed to be waiting for him to speak. Jack tried to think. He tried to remember his name. He had to do something, before she lost interest. He opened his mouth and heard himself say, idiotically: "Do you come here often?" . . .

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That's all for now!

Tuesday, February 14, 2012

Character Interview: La-ren from my SF novel Twin-Bred

Here's an interview with one of the Tofa characters from my science fiction novel Twin-Bred.

Q. Please introduce yourself.


A. My name is La-ren. The hyphen represents a sound that humans usually compare to a hiccup. Any approximation will do. I am not easily offended.

Q. How did you come to know any humans?

A. My species, the Tofa, is acquainted with humans because a small group of them came to my planet, Tofarn, approximately 85 Terran years ago and established a colony. I personally became acquainted with one human, my twin sister Judy, from the moment I can be said to have existed at all. Our host mother Laura carried us both. (Actually, Judy is Laura's biological daughter as well, but I do not believe it has made much difference.) Judy and I lived with Laura, in a cottage on the grounds of the L.E.V.I. Project, until our early teens, when we moved into the main compound to share a room near other Twin-Bred pairs. We are very fond of our host mother, but it is more entertaining and less constricting to live near our peers -- even with the constant oversight of Project staff.

Q. What is the L.E.V.I. Project?

A. The initials stand for Long-term Emissary Viviparous Initiative. The acronym has a significance that I am not at liberty to explain.

The goal of the Project is to enable the human and Tofa communities to understand each other better. Before the Project was initiated, and even while it has been underway, our mutual inability to comprehend each other's attitudes, motivations and behavior has led to many confrontations, any of which could have escalated into a major conflict.

Q. What do you think of humans?

A. My experience of humans is somewhat limited so far. I cannot expect those humans who chose to join the Project to be typical. If I did make that assumption, I would believe humans to be dedicated, curious, hard-working, friendly, and relatively hard to startle. But if that were the general human profile, I doubt the Project -- and Judy and I -- would exist at all.

Q. What is your role in the Project?

A. I am meant to serve multiple functions. From birth onward, I and the other Tofa Twin-Bred have been accessible for human observation and study. The difficulty is that we present a perhaps extreme example of the observer altering the phenomenon observed. We were altered in small ways at an embryonic stage in order that human women could carry us. We shared a womb with a human fetus, with results difficult to isolate. And we have been raised around more humans than Tofa. I wish I could tell you -- I wish I could know -- how much we differ from what you might call "normal" Tofa.

I hope to have the opportunity, before too long, to answer that question. We -- all of us Twin-Bred, Tofa and human -- have been trained to act as mediators between the human and Tofa communities. That is the second essential function we are meant to perform. There appear to be political obstacles. My friends and I are becoming impatient.

Advice for New and Would-Be Authors

This is a presumptuous blog post. I am an appellate attorney and thus write for a living, but I have been writing fiction (after a thirty-year hiatus) for less than two years -- surely too short a time for me to pose as an experienced author deigning to instruct the novice. However, I spent much of the last year and more not only writing and revising, but searching out and devouring advice by authors for authors. What follows are suggestions that I have found in my reading and then verified by experience.

With no further apology, here is some advice for the new or would-be author.

• Read, read, read. Read fiction, biography, history -- whatever interests you. Read authors whose voice appeals to you.

• Don't let anyone tell you whether you're meant to be, or whether you are, a writer. Even well-meaning folks may be poor critics, and not everyone who makes pronouncements on your potential will be well-meaning.

• Keep pen and paper, or some other means of taking notes, with you at all times. Don't assume you'll remember your great idea five minutes from now -- write it down immediately! Get or jury-rig a lighted note pad for your bedside table. (A clip-on book light attached to a cheap note pad will work.) If you get ideas in the shower, mutter them over and over to yourself until you reach dry land.

• Become compulsive about multiple backups of your idea notes, works in progress, rough drafts, subsequent drafts, etc. Use "the cloud" (Web-based storage), e.g., Dropbox or Evernote. (I use Dropbox. Once it's running on your computer, it will back up a document stored in your Dropbox folder every time you save. But check periodically to make sure it's still running!) Email attachments to yourself (and then check whether your email host is periodically deleting them). Put files on a separate hard drive and on flash drives.

• This one is YMMV (Your Mileage May Vary). That said, I and many other authors find it essential to keep the inner editor gagged and stuffed in a closet when we're working on a rough draft. Don't be afraid to leave blanks or bracketed notes as you go. (My second-to-latest rough draft had one that read "[insert appropriate South American country here].") National Novel Writing Month (www.nanowrimo.org), in which participants aim to write a novel of at least 50,000 words within the month of November, is a great way to accomplish this. There'll be time enough later for lots and lots of rewriting.

• A related point: find the process that works for you. Some authors outline in detail. Others find too specific an outline stifling, and work from less organized notes of possible scenes, or with no notes at all. Some have a fixed time of day for writing, and allow nothing to disrupt it; others flit back and forth all day between writing and other tasks. Some use computers; some still write longhand, and a few swear by typerwriters.

• Think seriously about self-publishing. There's a wealth of info and support out there for indie authors. Conversely, this is a risky time to sign a contract with an agent or publisher. Because of the uncertain and fast-changing conditions in the publishing industry, many agents and publishers are inserting "rights grabs" and other clauses in their contracts that could cripple an author's career. Some of the worst language may be hidden in unexpected places like "warranty" clauses. If you do sign with an agent or publisher, try to find a way to pay a good IP attorney to go through the contract with a microscope. Don't let the allure of "having an agent" or "being published" lead you to grab at an offer of representation or publication without vetting it thoroughly.

That's all for now. Happy writing!

Monday, February 13, 2012

New blog with book covers and descriptions

Just a shout-out to a new blog, Tomtey, that's helping authors by showing a nice big image of their book's cover. Click on the cover and you find the cover again :-), but this time with a description and a link to the Amazon purchase page. Thanks to the (unidentified) person who started this blog!

Saturday, February 11, 2012

Snatching Defeat from the Jaws of Victory, Republican Primary Edition

Great job, guys.

You've been sailing along on the good ship Republican Primary, shooting holes in the deck under each other's feet. The public is getting heartily sick of you: Obama's starting to whip your sorry butts in the polls. You may as well haul down the dishonored flag of the ex-president whose 11th Commandment you've been ignoring, and set fire to the foundering wreck.

Let's hope someone can bring that almost forgotten vessel Brokered Convention out of dry dock and plot a true course in her.

Monday, January 16, 2012

An Open Letter to Jon Huntsman

Dear Governor Huntsman:

Please accept my sympathy on the occasion of your withdrawal from the presidential campaign. I believe your experience was undervalued, and I thank you for your willingness to serve.

You may well believe that Romney has unfairly been cast as the most "electable" of the Republicans running. I have no doubt that liberal and moderate Democratic voters would have considered you the least unacceptable Republican candidate. The problem, I suppose, is that such a status foreseeably does little good in the general election when these voters have an actual Democrat to vote for.

If you have a period of more leisure now that you have left the campaign, I respectfully suggest that you further investigate the issue of global warming, so that you will not again embarrass yourself by equating global warming skeptics with anti-evolution crusaders or by implying that there is a clear scientific consensus in favor of alarming and anthropogenic global warming. This is not, as in the case of civil unions, an issue on which your opposition is driven largely by ignorance or prejudice.

Please see this earlier blog post (from October 2010) for some good sources:

Global Warming, Skepticism, and the Liberal Mindset

A slightly more recent example of scientific disagreement as to the meaning of relevant data may be found  in this December 2010 article from Reason magazine. See also this July 2011 article from Forbes magazine, relating how new data from NASA shows far more heat escaping Earth's atmosphere than alarmist AGW models had predicted.

Well, that should get you started. The best of luck in your political and personal future.

Saturday, January 14, 2012

Silly poems I wrote for my daughter

When my older daughter was around 8 years old, she had a computer program in which she could "write a book" by making drawings and typing accompanying text onto a screen that looked like lined paper. She was already an artist, and for a while she would do a drawing and I would write a silly poem to accompany it. I decided last night that it might be fun to post one of those poems from time to time. Here's my favorite, which I may never use in a published picture book because it includes one word that most children probably don't know.

Gooey globs of last year's lunch
Fossil feasts you used to munch
All the unremoved detritus
Of Don'twannabrusheeyitis
This is what you need a tool for
This is to clean up your drool for
If I haven't made it clear --
Please go brush your teeth, my dear!

Sunday, January 08, 2012

The 2012 Science Fiction Experience, and Why I Read and Write SF

I'm joining a Thing -- not a challenge or competition or anything very structured -- called the 2012 Science Fiction Experience, described at Stainless Steel Droppings. As a contribution thereto, I'm posting something I wrote for my recently completed virtual book tour, titled "Why I Love Reading and Writing Science Fiction." Here goes....

I'll start with a caveat. I do not always write science fiction. For many otherwise fallow years, I wrote picture book manuscripts. More recently, between my current release and the sequel (still in rough draft), I wrote what I suppose is general fiction, if a novel in that category can take place in my fanciful notion of an afterlife.

That said, I am proud to write science fiction.

I don't remember when I started reading science fiction, but I'd guess I was around ten or eleven. I have been reading it ever since. The day I met my husband, twenty-five years ago, we talked for two hours about Robert A. Heinlein and assorted other SF authors. As you might suppose, our marriage exposed me to even more of the genre.

How do I love science fiction? Let me count the ways. . . .

Science fiction explores how human beings – whether acknowledged as such, or in any of innumerable disguises – react to the unexpected. How do they – how would we – cope with the fulfillment of anything from dream to nightmare? How will the future we anticipate surprise us? How will we surprise ourselves when we confront it?

Science fiction's imaginative settings allow us to examine familiar themes and problems with a fresh eye. (Star Trek, despite its flaws, was often excellent at using the trappings of science fiction to explore issues like racism, war and peace, patriotism, gender identity, ambition, love versus career, et cetera.) I am a lawyer; I am writing a series of short stories which will eventually include legal issues raised by certain future technologies. I have long been fascinated by twins: my novel Twin-Bred features fraternal twins (carried by host mothers) belonging to different species. I have been deeply interested in parenthood since becoming a mother: I can create aliens for whom parenthood is in many ways different, and in some fundamental ways the same.

Science fiction paves the way. Its authors, often scientists themselves, extrapolate from current technology and knowledge, and make educated guesses about what we will be able to invent. Often they guess correctly. It might be easier to identify the scientific advances of the last sixty years that were not predicted in science fiction than to list those that were. By working within the constraints of scientific theory, science fiction honors those who have spent their lives helping us understand our universe (and any meta-universe which may include it).

Finally, science fiction gives the would-be builder of worlds a place to play. While fantasy does the same, science fiction imposes certain constraints – and as many a poet would testify, some constraints can actually spur creativity. At any rate, I find satisfaction in knowing that what I have imagined, or what another author lays before me, could possibly exist. Science fiction authors differ in how hard they strive to ensure that the physical features of their planets, aliens, and technologies fit within our current scientific theories (or at least, scientific hypotheses held by at least one adventurous scientist out there). No scientist myself, I still try fairly hard. I use my husband, whose scientific knowledge runs broad and deep, as my technical adviser – but if I really want to make the sky green, or put multiple sails on the sailboat, or whatever, and he is skeptical, I just keep researching until (with luck) I find some more or less plausible basis to do so. On the other hand, unlike historical fiction, where the possibility of error lurks behind every detail, the amount of research need not be too intimidating.

I'd love to see comments about what visitors to this blog like most about science fiction -- or about any problems they have with the genre.

Saturday, January 07, 2012

Excerpt from Twin-Bred (for use in #SampleSunday)

I just found out about #SampleSunday, where authors of Kindle books post excerpts from their novels and retweet each other's links. Here's an excerpt from my current release, Twin-Bred.

[Context: The human colony on Tofarn and the indigenous Tofa have great difficulty communicating with and basically comprehending each other. Scientist Mara Cadell is running a project where host mothers carry twins, one human and one Tofa, in the hope that the bond between twins can bridge the gap between species. Alan Kimball, a member of the governing human Council, is hostile to the Tofa and has inserted agents into the project.]

Tilda looked at her twins, cuddled close together in the crib. Mat-set had all four arms wrapped around Suzie. They seemed to cuddle any chance they got. Maybe they were glad to be free of separate amniotic sacs.

She looked down at Mat-set and remembered the rumors of Tofa with five arms instead of four. She had even seen pictures, but who knew whether they were authentic. Certainly none of the Tofa Twin-Bred babies had been born with extra limbs.

Tilda glanced over at the big dormitory clock and then back down at the babies. She gasped and staggered a step back. Mat-set was still holding Suzie with four arms. So how was he scratching his head with another one?

Tilda looked around wildly for a chair, found one blessedly nearby, and sank down on it. She pinched herself. Nothing changed. Well, who said you couldn’t pinch yourself in a dream and keep on dreaming?

She got up and walked, a bit unsteadily, to the intercom and buzzed for a nurse. Then she went back to the crib. Of course. Four arms, only four, and what was she going to do now?

She decided to be brave and sensible. If she had really seen it, the staff had to know. And if she hadn’t, and she didn’t wake up, then she was ill, and she should get the help she needed.



The chief nurse tucked Tilda in and watched her drift off to sleep, sedative patch in place. Then she went back to her station and called up the monitor footage on Tilda’s twins.
Well, well.



* CONFIDENTIAL *
CLEARANCE CLASS 3 AND ABOVE

LEVI Status Report, 12-15-71
Executive Summary

Anatomical Developments

Observation of the Tofa infants has shed some light on the longstanding question of whether the number of Tofa upper appendages is variable among the Tofa population. The thickest of the four armlike appendages is apparently capable of dividing when an additional upper appendage is desired. . . .



Councilman Kimball bookmarked the spot in his agent's report and opened his mail program. He owed an apology to the young man who had claimed his poor showing against a Tofa undesirable was due to the sudden appearance of an extra appendage. Apparently the man had been neither dishonest nor drunk.

After discharging that obligation, Kimball made a note to seek further details as to the divided arms' placement, reach, and muscular potential. His people needed adequate information to prepare them for future confrontations. After all, forewarned — he laughed out loud at the thought — was forearmed.

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And here's where to buy the Kindle version of Twin-Bred: http://amzn.to/u2OtVP

Friday, January 06, 2012

Interview with Terri Morgan, author of Playing the Genetic Lottery

Today I'm featuring an interview with Terri Morgan, author of the novel Playing the Genetic Lottery. Welcome, Terri!

Q. Your novel is the story of a woman who grew up with two schizophrenic parents. How did you come to write this book?

A. The novel was sparked by a comment from a friend, who like me, is fascinated with people and what makes them behave the way they do. She mentioned something to me one day about a woman she had met who essentially raised her six younger siblings because both of her parents had schizophrenia. At the beginning of our conversation I had had not intentions of ever writing fiction. By the end, I just know I had to write this novel.

Q. Do you have any family members with schizophrenia?

A. My grandfather's cousin, Ina, who lived with my grandparents in Connecticut, was schizophrenic. She was a sweet, loving woman who was very much a treasured part of the family. Nobody really talked much about her condition, because that was just the way she was. They didn't try to hide it, but her illness wasn't what defined her. But no one in my immediate family has or had the disease, so this novel is in no way autobiographical.

Q. What's your background as a writer?

A. I've been a freelance journalist for over 30 years, writing for newspapers, magazines, newsletters, web pages, you name it. I've written literally thousands of different articles on hundreds of different topics. I've also written four non-fiction books for young adults, and co-authored four additional non-fiction books.

Q. This is your first novel. Did you envision yourself writing fiction?

A. A long long time ago I did. Like my protagonist, I've always loved reading. So it was natural for me to start writing creatively when I was in about the sixth grade. I wrote a lot of fiction off and on until my junior year of college. I knew I wanted a career as a writer, and I realized my chances of success were much greater if I switched to non-fiction. So I pursued a career as a freelance journalist, and never, ever thought I'd write any fiction again, let alone a novel.

Q. Many first novels are autobiographical. Is this the case in Playing the Genetic Lottery?

A. Definitely not. However, I did borrow tidbits from my life, my husband's life, and stories friends had told me over the years in minor ways. I took so many liberties with those tales, however, that they barely resemble the original events.

Q. Any examples?

A. My husband and I had a running joke about the president being Calvin Coolidge. Like the character Caitlin and Jason meet in the waiting room of the behavioral health unit, Gary was fascinated with history and politics, and had a fantastic memory historical figures, events, and dates.

Q. Your novel is set largely in Cumberland Oregon, but I can't find Cumberland on any map. Why is that?

A. That's because it doesn't exist, except in my head and in the book. That's the beauty of fiction, you can invent new worlds. Residents of my home town in Santa Cruz County, California, however, will recognize some of the names of local businesses and landmarks that I borrowed to use in Cumberland. Even though some of the places in my novel share the same name as some real sites in another state, they are all used fictionally and in no way resemble the originals.

Q. Did you borrow any other real names or places for the novel?

A. Most of the names I made up, although I did use the first and last names of several of my favorite elementary school teachers as some of the characters as a tribute to them. I also used some dates that are significant to family members. That's one of the fun things about being a novelist. You can honor the important people in your life privately in a very public manner.


Q. What did you like best about writing this novel?

A. I loved it all. I love learning new things, so researching schizophrenia was a labor of love. I read everything I could find on schizophrenia and the impact it has on patients and their families. I talked to people who had schizophrenic relatives, and read a lot of blogs and posts on-line to get a feel for what it's like to care for someone who is mentally ill. I loved creating the characters in this book, and inventing stories and situations for them. I enjoyed putting them onto paper. It was all fun.

Q. What message or messages would you like readers to come away with?

To be compassionate with people who may look or act differently. Don't be so quick to judge someone who appears odd because they could be suffering from a medical condition. And keep in mind that mentally ill people also have families and friends who love them. Nobody wants to be hit with a devastating mental illness, and everyone deserves to be treated with respect.

Q. Where can readers find your novel?

A. Right now, it's available as an e-book through www.smashwords.com/books/view/104186, and at www.amazon.com. I expect to release a paperback version of Playing the Genetic Lottery this spring. Readers can also find out more about the book at www.terrimorgan.net. Anyone who wants me to notify them when the paperback is available is welcome to email me at terri@terrimorgan.net.

Friday, December 30, 2011

Paperback of my current novel is discounted on Amazon!

The mysterious gods of Amazon have decreed that, for some unknown period, my science fiction novel Twin-Bred is on sale on Amazon -- marked down from $12.99 to $9.35. Time to take the plunge, y'all!...

Thursday, December 29, 2011

Some Favorite Reads from 2011

Now that Twin-Bred has made two lists of favorite 2011 reads :-), it seems only right that I "pay it forward" and post a list of my own. Mine will include both 2011 releases and books I read for the first time in 2011.

In no particular order, here are a few books I read this year and greatly enjoyed. The first two were released in 2011.

--Doc by Mary Doria Russell. I have loved every book except one by this author (the one being Dreamers of the Day). Her science fiction novel The Sparrow may be my favorite novel of any genre or type, from any era. I'm delighted that I loved Doc as well.

Doc is historical fiction, dealing with the early days of John ("Doc") Holliday. I learned a great deal about characters with whom most of us (in the U.S. at least) are somewhat familiar, and about others in the Earp circle. As usual for Russell, the writing is beautiful and the portrayal of the characters often deeply moving. There is one long and stylistically unusual passage, about how things might have gone if one event had been different, that I particularly cherish in memory.

--These is My Words by Nancy Turner. Also historical fiction -- and yes, this and science fiction are probably my favorite genres. . . . This novel purports to be the diary of Sarah Agnes Prine, Arizona pioneer, written from 1881 to 1901. While the events described are not unrelieved tragedy, this account in other hands could have been leaden and depressing. It is, instead, inspirational, uplifting, and often very funny.

--Remnant Population by Elizabeth Moon. This science fiction novel was published in 2003, but I had never encountered it before this month. Like my debut novel Twin-Bred, it concerns issues in communicating with the indigenous sentient species on another planet. I recommend it for its handling of those issues and of the alien species itself, but even more for the evolution of the main character, Ofelia. It's a delight to see her come into her own.

--Solitaire by Kelley Eskridge. More science fiction published in 2003 -- a good year, it seems. . . . I'm going to be lazy and suggest that you look it up on Amazon for plot info. The plot, for me, was secondary. I loved the relationships between characters, and Eskridge's enviable gift for just the right amount of vivid and original description.

--Wild Seed by Octavia Butler. Butler apparently died in 2006, but somehow I missed the news until recently. Readers of science fiction will greatly miss her. This is my favorite of several related books, eventually published together under the title From Seed to Harvest. It involves two very unusual and formidable people who meet and develop a relationship as unique as they are. One of them, in particular, is in many ways very unsympathetic -- and yet, we sympathize.

That's all for now. I may add a few more in a subsequent post. (Maybe if Twin-Bred shows up on any more end-of-year lists. :-) )

Saturday, December 24, 2011

Old purchase link for Twin-Bred on Kindle defunct -- new link...

For some reason or other, Amazon has switched the URL for purchasing the Kindle edition of Twin-Bred. The one I've distributed far and wide no longer works. :-(  Here's the new one.... http://www.amazon.com/Twin-Bred-ebook/dp/B005VDVHQ2/ref=sr_1_2?ie=UTF8&qid=1324759955&sr=8-2