I'm pleased, delighted, darn near overjoyed to announce that my first-ever book trailer is finished and available for viewing. I wrote the script, and Holy Smoke Photography brought it beautifully to life.
Here's the YouTube link.
(The preorder links -- which will be full-fledged purchase links in two days -- are here: Amazon, Google Play (where it's discounted at the moment), and several other retailers.
Writing About Writing, Life, and Occasionally Law or (Rarely) Politics I post news about and excerpts from my novels and my picture books, plus miscellaneous thoughts, speculations and occasional rants about writing, publishing, current events, legal issues, philosophy, photography, and events in my life.
Monday, October 15, 2018
Excerpt from later in WATER TO WATER, still spoiler-free
It's getting trickier to find excerpts from Water to Water that don't include spoilers, but I think this one from Chapter 16 qualifies.
For reasons the reader will understand by this point, Honnu, a young member of the Vushlu species, and two of the Weesah species, a brother and sister named Kititit and Tototee respectively, are investigating a phenomenon involving fishing villages. They've come up with a tactic that involves some deceit.
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Honnu balked at first. “I’m not a good
liar. And I’d be ashamed to lie to people who are grieving.”
Tototee looked at him as if she could see
every lie he had ever told carved into his armor. “Don’t think of it as lying,
then. Think of it as acting.”
Kititit made a gesture that must have been
sibling-speak for back off, then bent
down to look Honnu in the eye. “This is a strange business we’ve thrown
ourselves into, and we’ll all be doing things we haven’t done. How about you
think about ways this lie, and that’s what it is, could help the family instead
of hurting ‘em. They’re likely to be lonely. Most people steer clear of folks
who are grieving, not knowing what to say or how to act. You show up and give
them company and a listener for their memories, you could be doing a rare
kindness.”
Honnu looked at Kititit, looked down at his
front feet, looked back at Kititit. “I’ll try. Once, anyway.”
Tototee patted his arm in a rare reassuring
gesture. “It probably won’t come up. Anyway.”
But it did, in the very next town. One of
the Vushla celebrated in a competitor’s song had studied sea creatures,
spending most of her time moving up and down the coast, going out with the
fishers or, later on, in her own specially equipped boat.
Honnu approached the house, half hoping the
family would be out on some errand, half wanting to get the ordeal over with.
As he reached the door, he saw that someone had hung a familiar symbol, a
broken shell similar to the shell Terrill’s father had used to make his harp.
He had not known that any Vushla except fisher folk marked their doors in that
manner after a death, but maybe the scientist’s profession explained it. He
stood long enough to fight off a sharp pang of homesickness, then knocked.
The female Vushlu who answered, neither
young nor old, might have been the scientist’s daughter or niece. She stood in
the doorway, gravely polite, as Honnu stammered out his condolences. When he
came to a halt, she asked, “Did you know my mother?” (Daughter, then.)
“I live — usually live — by the sea. My
family are fisher folk.” True. “We don’t get that many visitors, so we remember
the ones we get.” Still true. “Most of them aren’t nearly as interesting as
your mother.” True again.
The daughter opened the door wider. “Won’t
you come in?”
Inside, there was another female about the
same age as the daughter, and a male who seemed to be the daughter’s mate. The
daughter introduced Honnu as “someone who knew Ma from her field work.” Honnu
forced himself not to flinch.
They brought him pastry and fruit, which he
accepted with unease he hoped he managed to hide. He tried to think of some
kindness he could offer in return, and came up with another misleading truth.
“It was awfully brave of her to go out on the water. Nobody does that except us
fisher folk, usually.”
The daughter stood a little straighter.
“Yes, she was brave.” She laughed softly. “Or so curious she didn’t care if she
was nervous. . . . Would you like to see her collection of specimens? Many of
them are elsewhere, of course, but she kept some favorites here.”
He could hardly say no. “Yes, please.”
The daughter appointed herself guide to the
collection, and — to Honnu’s relief, as he had wondered whether this intrusion
would end up pointless — had stories to tell about many of the objects. “Ma
took the most awful risks for this one. She actually fell out of the boat, and
if there hadn’t been two strong fisher folk with her . . . . She drew many of
her specimens, but the drawing she did of this one was her favorite . . . . I
went with her the time she found that, but I dropped it in the boat and she was
afraid I’d broken it . . . . This one here is from her first trip, and this one
over here is from her last, thirty years later . . . .”
He was exhausted by the time he left. But
Kititit and Tototee made him recite everything he could remember, right away
while it was fresh in his mind. He could hardly talk by the time they took pity
on him and sent him off for a nap.
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Friday, October 12, 2018
Another character interview from a previous book -- Cassidy from Wander Home
Here's another character interview rescued from disappearing blog links.
Cassidy is an important character in Wander Home. Wander Home is an afterlife fantasy, a family drama, and a mystery, with romance elements as well. (Whew.)
In the book's vision of the afterlife, you can be any age at any moment, depending on your mood and what you wish to do. You can also visit places you and others remember, and relive memories.
Cassidy died in early childhood, but assumes a range of ages in the afterlife. She is often a teenager.
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Cassidy is an important character in Wander Home. Wander Home is an afterlife fantasy, a family drama, and a mystery, with romance elements as well. (Whew.)
In the book's vision of the afterlife, you can be any age at any moment, depending on your mood and what you wish to do. You can also visit places you and others remember, and relive memories.
Cassidy died in early childhood, but assumes a range of ages in the afterlife. She is often a teenager.
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1. Cassidy, please tell us a little about your character.
I guess I'm a
basically happy person. I think I was meant to be, anyway. I like to meet
people, and they seem to like me when I do. There are some things I get angry
or sad about, when I let myself think about them.
2. Who is your best friend?
That's kind of
complicated. My only friends from before -- from when I was alive -- are
Grandma Sarah and Grandpa Jack and my great-grandma Amanda. I wouldn't have
called them "friends," before -- but now, we can all be the same age
and play together, if we want, and we do that pretty often.
I've made lots of
new friends, and probably my best friend I've met here is Becca. We do all
sorts of things, at all sorts of ages. And when one of us is sad, the other one
slips old enough to comfort her and take care of her.
3. Now be honest, how is it working with Author Karen A.
Wyle?
I don't always
like the things she makes me remember. But she sent me to some pretty awesome
places. And she brought my mother back. That matters more than anything -- even
if things were more complicated and harder than I thought they would be.
4. Is there a special someone in your life? Tell us a bit about them.
I'm not exactly
sure. Becca and I are really close, and sometimes we make each other's bodies
feel good. I haven't done that with very many people. But we're not each
other's special someone the way Grandma and Grandpa are special to each other.
Most of the
couples I know came here as couples already, even if one of them had to wait a
long time for the other. But some people pair up here, and I guess that might
happen to me.
5. What’s a secret you can share with us?
Sometimes I kind
of wish I could have a baby of my own, some day. I won't get to do that. I'll
probably take care of some of the babies that come here, and help them learn
how to be kids and grownups.
6. What are your hobbies and interests?
I love to do so
many things! I ride horses, and I climb anything I can find to climb, and I go
new places -- lots of places -- and I dance, and I watch Great-Grandma dance,
and I talk to Grandma and Grandpa and Great-Grandma about all the things they
did in their lives.
7. What is your most embarrassing memory?
It's in Wander Home. I misunderstood something,
and got really mad at my mom about it. I feel like an idiot when I remember
that.
8. Where can readers find out more about you and your
author?
Karen has a
website at www.KarenAWyle.com. She doesn't take care of it very well, though.
It tends to stay the same until something big happens, like a new book.
Sometimes she remembers to put up new interviews and reviews and such. She's
better about her Facebook author page, at www.facebook.com/KarenAWyle. She
reposts articles that writers or readers might like, and puts up bits of her books. And she's on Twitter as @KarenAWyle.
So far, I'm only in Wander Home and in a story called
"The Library." The story happens before Wander Home does, and it's mainly about another girl named Rachel,
but we meet in the library, and I try to help her a little.
Previous books' character interviews -- Levi from Twin-Bred
Here's another character interview from Twin-Bred. I've tweaked it a bit. (For example, back then I apparently didn't use the Oxford comma. Hard to believe . . . .)
Introductory Note: this would be, to say the least, a difficult interview to arrange. "Levi Thomas" was the name that would have belonged to Mara Cadell's fraternal twin, had he survived to be born. He died shortly before that point. Mara, emotionally traumatized by that loss, coped by keeping Levi alive in her mind as a companion. (The traumatic nature of her loss is based on reports from many twin survivors.)
Introductory Note: this would be, to say the least, a difficult interview to arrange. "Levi Thomas" was the name that would have belonged to Mara Cadell's fraternal twin, had he survived to be born. He died shortly before that point. Mara, emotionally traumatized by that loss, coped by keeping Levi alive in her mind as a companion. (The traumatic nature of her loss is based on reports from many twin survivors.)
Q:
Let's start with the obvious. Are you real? Or a creation of Mara's
imagination?
A: Wouldn't you like to know?
I could tell you to ask Mara -- not that she's in a
particularly good position to answer that question -- but of course, she
doesn't like to talk about me. She'd be quite perturbed that you even know of
my existence (if that's what we call it for purposes of discussion).
Q:
How is it that you two function? Does she just hear you, like a voice, or is
there something more? Emotions, sensations?
A: Let me check my notes. Or rather, Mara's
therapist's notes. Yes, here's what she told him. "We talk. It’s more
immediate than, say, hearing music in your head — but it’s not like someone’s
in the room.”
Q: Do
you ever have control over Mara, in any way? Like an alternate personality taking
over a body.
A: I
don't possess her. I'm not a dybbuk. I may influence her behavior on occasion
-- by distracting her, or making her laugh when she shouldn't, that sort of
thing. And I try to talk her into doing what I recommend in various situations.
I have a surprisingly good record there.
Q: Do you play any part in Mara's artwork -- her drawing and
cartooning?
A: Not directly. I don't think I would have been that
visual. I'm more about the words. We often talk about her drawings. Sometimes I
lack the context to understand them, and she explains. And her cartoons show a
sense of humor that she doesn't normally indulge. That side of her, that hidden
mischief, is where she and I are most alike.
Q:
To what extent do you see yourself as separate from Mara? And a related question: do you form your own
attachments to people, ideas, or things?
A:
Shall I say, we're inseparable? . . . There have been cases of conjoined twins
where surgical separation would have killed one of the two. Sometimes that has
been necessary, so that at least one could survive. If it's ever necessary for
Mara's sake that I cease to be part of her life, that'll be all she wrote, as
far as my existence goes. Or so I assume. It's a strange universe, and I'm
hardly an authority on what surprises it may have in store.
I do
have opinions. I may trust some people less than Mara does, and let her
know it. I doubt I've ever trusted anyone more than she does. I'm the
suspicious type.
Q: Is
Mara better or worse off for your presence, do you think? What do you think
would happen if people found out about you at the Twin-bred project?
Let's
take those questions one at a time.
Mara would be better off if I had lived. And it's possible
she'd be better off if I had never existed. I'm not sure "better to have
loved and lost" applies in these circumstances, if it ever does. . .
. But there we were, twins. There's no
getting around that starting
point. And she's tenacious, in love as in other things. It wasn't in her nature
to simply move on. All things considered, I think she's better off isolated and
secretive than seriously depressed. And of course, I'm good company.
But
it's quite important, I believe, that I remain a secret. If people found out
about our little ménage a deux, it would very likely endanger the Project, and
might end Mara's career.
You must understand, Mara is not the easiest person to get
along with. She's prickly and doesn't suffer fools gladly. And she has a very
low tolerance for organizational politics. All of which means that only her
exceptional scientific ability induces people to put up with her. There are
many who would like to be shut
of her if they had a good enough excuse. Delusions of twin-hood? Good enough.
Q:
How do you feel your presence affects Mara with her work at the project,
dealing with twins all the time?
A: I exist because she needs me to help her cope with life
in general. Without my presence, or shall we say my availability -- I'm not
muttering in her ear nonstop -- I doubt she could handle being around twins day
in and day out.
I should add that despite the pain involved, there are ways
it's been healing for Mara, being surrounded by Twin-Bred. All around her, she
sees humans and Tofa, most of whom would never have had a twin if not for her.
You could say that she's ensured I didn't die in vain. Though I doubt she's
thought if it in those terms.
new links for previous books' character interviews - Dr. Mara Cadell from Twin-Bred
In updating my much-neglected website, I discovered that some of the links for my character interviews have expired. So I'm bringing those interviews home.
Here is an interview with my very first fictional character (not counting juvenelia), Dr. Mara Cadell, founder of the Twin-Bred project.
Here is an interview with my very first fictional character (not counting juvenelia), Dr. Mara Cadell, founder of the Twin-Bred project.
Introductory Note: Mara has a secret to keep, and
her answers to these questions reflect that. The secret: that her fraternal
twin brother, Levi, died shortly before birth, and that she has dealt with the
trauma of that loss by keeping him alive in her mind as a companion.
Q. When did you
first conceive of the Twin-Bred project?
A. In one sense,
the idea first occurred to me when I was quite young -- a child, in fact. I believe I was seven years old. I was -- I
was aware of the deep bond between twins, and I thought what a shame it was that humans and Tofa couldn't be
twins, so they'd get along better. It
was several years later that I learned about host mothers who carry fetuses for
other women. I immediately recalled
my earlier fancy, and wondered if the physical obstacles
to cross-species implantation and so on could be overcome.
Q. Do you regard
the Twin-Bred -- emotionally speaking -- as your children?
A. Not really.
The relationship isn't that -- personal. I don't hover and worry over every
little bump and bruise, or concern myself
with fusses and tantrums. The ones whose host mothers
have left would be much more likely to go to one of the nurses, possibly Chief Nurse Gaho, for something close to
maternal attention. I think my feelings are more like those of a teacher who takes pride in her students' progress and achievements.
Although I
am quite protective of the Twin-Bred's safety and well-being. You might say intensely protective.
Q. The official
name of the Twin-Bred project is the Long-Term Emissary Viviparous Initiative, or LEVI. Is it a
coincidence that those initials spell a name? Is the project named after someone in particular?
A. That's a
personal matter. Next question?
Q. Would it be
accurate to say that LEVI would never have gotten off the ground without funding and support from the governing
Council?
A. Certainly.
I'm no fundraiser. I have no particular gift for stroking egos and such. I suppose that if I'd happened to know someone
both wealthy and interested, we could have
managed with private funding. Most likely, we would still have had the same problems -- excuse me, occasional issues
-- about the time frame in which results could be
expected, and exactly what return on investment we could produce. Although we would have had personal continuity,
instead of the turnover we've naturally seen on the Council over time.
Q. I understand
you're an artist. What are your favorite subjects?
A. I don't
usually call myself an artist. I like to sketch. I've done a little painting,
but I rarely have time for it. My
cartoons tend to be about things that annoy me. It helps me keep my temper.
Q. I see you
have a cartoon on your desk. May I take a closer look?
A. (pause) Yes.
Of course.
Q. This cartoon
shows a woman sitting up in bed. It's you, isn't it? And she's holding a pillow at arm's length, and the pillow
is sticking out its tongue at her. And one of the moons, the larger one, is showing through the window -- but
it's making a really nasty face.
A. I don't
always sleep well. And on occasion my dreams can be less than pleasant. Now I don't wish to be rude, but I really do have
a great deal to do, and I'd best get back to it. Thank you for stopping by. I'll have someone give you a tour of the
facility on your way out. It's
worth seeing.
Character Interview with Terrill
Terrill is
a Vushlu. He would have become an adult next year by taking a ritual first journey
to the ocean with other Vushla his age. Instead, he attained adult status
prematurely, accompanying his dying father to the ocean, where his father went
into the water to be dissolved.
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Interviewing Terrill is a tricky task. As the book begins,
he is understandably morose. Later, when he is less so, he has good reasons not to reveal his activities and concerns. I’ve dealt with this dilemma
by splitting his interview into two, and working within the limitations Terrill
sets.
The first interview takes place at a rest stop during the
funeral party’s return trip. Terrill speaks in a quiet monotone most of the
time.
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Q. I’m very sorry about your father.
A. Thank you.
Q. It will take you quite a while to get home. How are you
occupying yourself along the way?
A. I’m trying to remember as much as I can about Da. [a
pause; he clenches and armors his fists] But the things I remember keep
reminding me of things I don’t know. Questions I never asked, and never can,
now. [long pause]
Q. Have you found any ways to keep your spirits up?
A. There’s a Weesah peddler who’s been traveling alongside
us. He likes to tell stories. When I listen to them, it takes my mind off . . .
other things. I’ve even laughed a few times. [glances to the side] Not that my
uncle approves. Of the listening or the laughing.
[An older Vushlu approaches; the interview concludes]
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The second interview takes place around three months (or
the equivalent) later. Terrill is now traveling in the peddler’s wagon, as is
Honnu, another Vushlu about his age.
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Q. Is this where you expected to be, at this time?
A. No. Nothing about what I’m doing these days is as I
expected. One unpredictable event has led to another.
Q. What can you tell me about these events?
A. [a slight smile – which for Vushla means a rounded mouth]
Very little, I’m afraid. Except that one of our funeral party, my aunt, became
very ill on the way home. The others returned to the sea with her. I [a short
pause] chose not to. That led to my becoming better acquainted with Honnu. And
that led to everything else.
Q. So do you think you’ll become a peddler?
A. [another smile] I don’t think so. But for now, I’m a
peddler’s assistant and have my duties. I’d better go.
Q. Perhaps we’ll meet again along the road.
A. I . . . don’t think that is very likely. But stranger
things have happened. [a quiet chuckle] Indeed they have.
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Tuesday, October 09, 2018
Next excerpts from upcoming SF novel WATER TO WATER - a little later on
Posting excerpts helps me wait more or less patiently for my upcoming book release -- so here are two more little ones, from Chapters 6 and 11 respectively, both mentioning waterfalls.
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(ten years earlier)
It sure felt different up here. Kititit
would have said, before, that of course he’d been in the mountains. After all,
he lived near that waterfall, and what else did the water fall down if it
wasn’t a mountain? But after making his way up and up and up the road for the
funeral and seeing what it was like, he’d have to find another word for the
heights near home.
Actually, he felt different in a couple of
opposite directions. The air didn’t seem to quite do the job air was supposed
to do, and that made him feel a little woozy — except the air was so completely
transparent that he felt, at the same time, wider awake.
Maybe those two effects, pulling in
different directions, had something to do how the old fellow had acted just
before the wind took him — giddy, laughing, almost drunk. Kititit might have
thought it was always that way, but some of the others at the funeral seemed
surprised. When Kititit’s time came, he’d kind of like to go like that.
Good thing the beast seemed to be feeling
the thin air less than he was. Why would that be? Did the first beasts, before
the Weesah found any, come from up high somewhere? Was there more grass and
bushes in the mountains, back then? Or was there some different reason
altogether? Well, if nobody knew, he could imagine it however he liked.
Hmmm. Look at that — a path heading off to
one side. He couldn’t see too far along it. And he also couldn’t see any trace
of wagon tracks, or cycle tracks for that matter — just scuff marks that might
have come from feet, or maybe just from puffs of wind.
He could head that direction for a while.
Maybe there’d be water. They’d passed the last stream a while ago. And maybe,
just maybe, nobody had ever gone that way, or not for a good long time. . . .
Yes,
he could go a little ways down that path. Just to see what he might see.
[and the next one, back in the present timeline . . . .]
It had been quite a while since Honnu
thought about the tales Kititit used to tell the fisher folk around the fire.
But it was with a shock of recognition that he looked out the window to see
water tumbling down a cliff above the road.
He had never imagined that water could take
such varying forms, or catch the light and throw it around as colors, or hang
in the air. And the sound! At home, water lapped like a beast drinking, or
hissed on the sand, or dragged pebbles in a grumble, or crashed when the surf
was high. This water roared, and not
in one voice, but in a chorus of voices.
Kititit sat back and laughed at Honnu’s reaction.
“Thought I was making it all up, did you? I’ve known this waterfall since I was
a lot younger than you. I’ve even climbed up it, in hot season when the water
dries up and you can find places to grip. Almost managed to fall down again,
all the same.”
It would take a Weesah, with their long
arms and legs and fingers, to climb that fractured stone surface even if the
water dried up completely. Honnu shivered at the idea. But the mighty music of
the water drove the thought, all thought, out of his mind. He let it fill him.
Terrill stirred beside him. Would his
friend think his wonder was childish, or provincial? But Terrill’s face showed
the same awe.
Sunday, October 07, 2018
Preorder links for Water to Water, my upcoming SF novel
If you've been reading the character interviews and excerpts I've been posting every three days or so, you've already seen the preorder links. But I thought I'd do a short post with just the links, for use on social media not specifically devoted to writing and publishing.
So here: you can preorder Water to Water on Amazon. Or if you prefer (e.g. if you read .epubs), you have your choice of a host of other retailers including B&N, Kobo, and Apple Books (with more to come), all from this Draft2Digital link.
Saturday, October 06, 2018
Character Interview with Willan, Terrill’s Father
Here's another interview with a character from Water to Water, my upcoming SF novel.
Terrill’s father Willan, whom Terrill calls Da, is terminally ill and on the way to the ocean. When he reaches it, he will, as dying Vushla do, swim or wade in and let the water dissolve him. Various relatives, including Terrill, and a few friends or neighbors are escorting Willan on this final journey. The interview presumably takes place during a rest stop. Willan’s voice is weak and his speech halting.
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No need to wait for the October 17th release -- the book is available for preorder from Amazon and several other retailers.
Terrill’s father Willan, whom Terrill calls Da, is terminally ill and on the way to the ocean. When he reaches it, he will, as dying Vushla do, swim or wade in and let the water dissolve him. Various relatives, including Terrill, and a few friends or neighbors are escorting Willan on this final journey. The interview presumably takes place during a rest stop. Willan’s voice is weak and his speech halting.
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Q. What can you tell me about your life?
A. Where to start . . . . I have a mate, Lilit, and three
children. The youngest, Terrill, is over there. The older ones work in cities
and couldn’t get home in time. I don’t have much time, I think.
Q. Is Lilit here?
A. No. We said goodbye at home. Most mates do. Dragging
things out . . . would have hurt her more. And she’s never been much for
traveling.
Q. What work did you do?
A. I did a lot of teaching, teaching children. In our town
and nearby. Most ages. I like teaching. And people seem to think I have a gift
for it. [a pause] And I make things. Different things. Sandals – lots of
sandals. Many people in our town wear my sandals. Boxes, with carved designs. I
like carving. [a pause] And I made one hand harp. I’d have made more, I think,
if I’d had time.
Q. If you don’t mind my asking, what are your thoughts about
the end of this journey? About swimming out to sea?
A. [a quiet sigh] That it’s a little soon. I’ve had a good
life. I would have liked it to have lasted a little longer. [a pause] But it’s
all right. Good things come to an end. [a small smile] And I like to learn new
things. I’ve been to the ocean, and to funerals, but this is the only way I can
learn about going into the waves. What it feels like. What the ocean sounds
like from the inside. Whether there’ll be anything to see.
I’m not afraid, really. I’ve never heard of anyone
struggling or crying out in pain.
I wish my children and Lilit didn’t have to grieve, and to
reshape their lives. Terrill – he’s too young for this. . . . He always looked
forward to that first trip to the sea, with the friends of his year. He had so
many plans for it. I’m sorry he’s had to trade those plans for this.
[Terrill starts heading toward Willan as the other Vushla
move back toward their cycles]
We’ll be going on now. And I should save my voice and my
strength for talking to my son.
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Wednesday, October 03, 2018
Time for another excerpt from WATER TO WATER
This excerpt, from Chapter 4, has some information you won't find in the blurb or the earlier excerpts -- but it isn't a spoiler, really.
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Given how they had met, it was no surprise
that some of Terrill’s curiosity ran to matters of death. How often did Vushlu
processions come to the beach where Honnu lived? Did Vushla come there from all
over, or only from the region Terrill came from? Did anyone get to the
shoreline and refuse to go in? Did anyone stand up and declare they would
recover, that they weren’t dying after all?
Honnu was embarrassed not to know more of
the answers. He had never known where the groups came from. He had never seen
someone turn around and go home again. He had never seen anyone refuse to wade
in, and then die on the beach. Though he had seen bodies of those who died on
the journey. That got tricky: the family and friends could hardly carry the
body into the water, lacking proper protective gear. A couple of times
recently, now that Honnu was old enough, he had been drafted into the burial
party. He had been just as glad to be wearing his gloves, so that he didn’t
have to touch the dead flesh with his hands.
That tale brought more questions. “Haven’t
you ever gotten wet, at all?”
Well, yes. All the young Vushla did, sooner
or later, dared by their friends or daring on their own. In his case, his
brothers had egged him on; but he had waited until they were busy to sneak off
to the water’s edge. Careless, maybe, but he preferred the risk to having them
see his reaction if he flinched.
“What was it like?”
Like nothing, at first. No more than if he
had spit on his own hand. Less than that, at first, where the spray hit his
armor. But after a few moments, there was a tingling. Like what sparkle would
feel like, if one could feel it. . . .
Sometimes Terrill asked about Weesah.
During one rest stop, he asked, “Have you ever seen a group of Weesah show up,
or a mixed group with the Weesah dying?”
“No, never. I think they have some other
way. But I don’t know what.”
Terrill glanced around for the peddler, but
he was out of sight, rearranging something in the wagon. “Don’t you wonder what
happens?”
“I suppose, now that you mention it.” And
Honnu wasn’t sure Terrill would work up the nerve to ask the peddler.
Well, Honnu didn’t mind.
He walked over to the back of the wagon and
called up, “Need any help?”
The peddler stuck his head out. “Not just
now. I’ll need something from the pair of you soon enough, I’m sure.” Then,
with that shrewd look Honnu had seen many times by now, he added, “But might
there be something you’re needing, or wanting, from me?”
Honnu tried for his most earnest
expression. “Not exactly. It’s more about what you might need from us. Not that
I’m expecting it. But we’re your crew now. We should know what to do if —” How
to put it? “If anything happens to you. Suddenly. If you should . . . where
would we take you? Would we need to get to the ocean, as soon as we could?”
“Oh, lad, I think you know better than
that. You’ve seen Weesah come and go on wagons,
but you’ve never seen one show up in a
wagon, have you?”
Honnu’s fingers went warm, and he fought
the urge to retract them into his armor. The peddler beckoned to Terrill. “Come
on, then. You may as well hear this.”
Terrill shuffled over, his fingers
retracted almost all the way. The peddler slapped him lightly on the back.
“It’s all right. Got to ask questions.” He nodded toward Honnu. “That’s how you
learn, isn’t it? You two want to know how Weesah die. Only natural. Well, here
it is. When we feel our time coming, we climb. Well, we ride, unless we live
close enough to climb on foot. We go to high places. Up in the mountains I’ve
told you about.”
Honnu opened his face plates, agreeing; so
did Terrill, who had heard about mountains by now, if not so often as Honnu
had.
“Or if we can’t get to the mountains, we
find the tallest tree we can. Either way, we need some place out in the open,
where the wind can reach us. That’s important.
“And then — then, we just reach our arms
out wide, to welcome the wind; and as soon as we die, the wind blows us away.
As dust.” He paused and tilted his large head to one side. “I’ve seen it twice.
I’d have to call it pretty. You see how our skin catches the light?” He pointed
to the shiny bits of skin on his arm. “It’s like that, except all the bits, on
all sides. We blow away, shining in the sun.”
Terrill finally found the nerve to speak
up. “And that’s only — I mean, how does the wind feel the rest of the time?
Before the time comes?”
The peddler shifted a bit from side to
side. “It feels good, lad. It feels, well, fine.” He gazed off into the
distance for a moment, smiling a little. Then he shook himself as if shedding
something and pointed to the wagon. “Now let’s have the two of you get in there
and help me sort things out, before we get to the next town. I’ll want the
goods that sell best to be nice and handy.”
Sunday, September 30, 2018
Character Interview with Honnu, a young Vushlu
Here's another character interview, this time with Honnu, one of the main Vushlu characters in my SF novel Water to Water. Honnu's family are fisher folk and live by the sea. This interview takes place around the time the story begins, on the beach, in late afternoon. Honnu is cleaning a fishing boat.
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Q. Hello. I hope I’m not disturbing –
A. Watch out! I’m using seawater here.
Q. It’s splashing all over you. Isn’t that a problem?
A. Not with this suit on. [He gestures along his body.]
It’ll keep the water out for years and years yet.
Q. Do you have such suits for visitors? For rent, perhaps?
A. Sorry, no. They take a long time to make. We only get
them when we’re done growing, and then we keep them for a long time. Let me
just finish up here, and we can talk.
[a few minutes later]
All done! I have a few minutes before I go do chores.
Q. I gather you fish for a living.
A. That’s right.
Q. Do you like it?
A. [a slight pause] Pretty well. I like working with other
people. More when they appreciate my help, which they mostly do. Of
course, I like it better some days than others. In hot season, it’s cooler out
on the water than on land – though the suit does make me warmer than I’d be
otherwise. Cold season, that can get, well, cold, suit or no suit. And
I get pretty tired by the end of the day. But it’s better than being bored.
[another pause] Not that I’m never bored.
Q. Do you picture yourself doing anything different, later
in your life?
A. [scuffs a hind foot in the sand] I’d like to see more of
the world, someday, somehow. I hear stories – mainly from the Weesah
peddler who comes here – and I want to see for myself whether they’re true, and
what other stories might be out there waiting to be found.
[someone calls Honnu’s name from a nearby dwelling]
I’d better go. Chores, like I said. It was nice talking to
you. If you want to come with me, you could maybe stay for dinner. The peddler
brought sausages, and we’ll be having a campfire.
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Thursday, September 27, 2018
Yup, another excerpt from upcoming SF novel WATER TO WATER
How many excerpts can I extract from my October 17th release, WATER TO WATER, and still avoid spoilers? We'll find out!
This one is from Chapter 3.
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This one is from Chapter 3.
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Terrill was almost home.
They would be home too soon. A bleak
prospect, that. Da would be gone; and everyone would be talking about him, on
and on. And Terrill would have to take on some new role, whatever it might be,
or whatever his family might decide it should be.
It could be a long
time before he went anywhere again.
The pain of giving
up the journey he would have made with the friends of his year, the joyful
adventure that he would never experience, pierced him afresh, a pang as cold as
the season to come.
And
this cold season, Da would not be there building
up the fire, or draping a blanket over Ma as she slept, or preparing the garden
for its coming nap. Terrill would never again see him come in from the garden,
smelling of soil and fresh air, rubbing his hands together to warm them,
spreading the dirt on them in the process.
A scene he had forgotten — that he had
wanted to forget — came back to him, as clearly if he had remembered it over
and over. He was very young. His father’s mother had been sick, moving slowly,
not talking much; and then she had gone away, hugging him as tightly as she
still could, and Da had gone with her. And after a long time, more days than
Terrill could count yet, Da had come home again. He had come through the door,
and looked around, stared around, as if everything had become strange and
different while he was gone. It had scared Terrill enough to make him cry.
What would it be like for Terrill to walk
through that door, with his father gone?
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Tuesday, September 25, 2018
Character Interview -- Kititit the Weesah peddler
It's time for you all to meet some of Water to Water's characters.
Kititit, the Weesah peddler, is what you might call an important secondary character. Look hard enough at something that happens, and you might see his long fingers stirring around in it. And I, for one, find him entertaining. Here's an interview with Kititit.
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Kititit, the Weesah peddler, is what you might call an important secondary character. Look hard enough at something that happens, and you might see his long fingers stirring around in it. And I, for one, find him entertaining. Here's an interview with Kititit.
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Q. How did you become a peddler?
A. Well, now. That’s a ways to think back . . . . When I was
a young sprout, we had a neighbor who was a peddler, wagon and all. I thought her wagon was about the
prettiest thing I’d ever seen, all painted up as it was. And she used to let me
help load the goods in the back – leastways, helping is what she called it.
Getting in the way is what I’d call it, remembering. And when she’d been away
and came home again, she always had stories to tell about the places she’d
been. I’d never been anywhere, and I got to hankering after a life like she
had.
Q. Your wagon – did it used to be your neighbor’s?
A. Right you are! Though by the time she figured she was
ready to stay home and play with her grandchildren and take it easy, the wagon
was what you might call used up – the canopy, anyway. My folks gave me a new
one, and I picked what to paint on it.
Q. You have a mate and children, I hear. How have you
managed to strike a balance between traveling and family life?
A. Well, I don’t have just any mate. I made sure to find a
lady as liked to hear stories. I promised to always bring back plenty of
stories. And she’s an independent sort – doesn’t need someone at her elbow all
the time, telling her how to do things. A mate as hung around every day might
get annoying for such as her. So we suit each other. And the longer I’m away,
the longer I stay home and do my bit with the young ‘uns and the beasts and the
garden and all. And now that some of our young ‘uns are grown, she has plenty
of help when she needs it.
Q. You’re acquainted with Terrill and Honnu, I believe. How
did that come about?
A. I’ve known Honnu a good piece of his life, I’d say. I
visit a few different fisher villages, and he lives – or lived, I’m not sure
which is right just now – in one of ‘em. I was the first Weesah he ever saw, I
reckon, and how he would stare! Anyhow, he’s a curious fellow and always likes
to hear my traveler’s tales.
Q. That brings up an interesting point. Aren’t you somewhat
given to exaggeration in those tales of yours? Should Honnu believe everything
you say?
A. (laughs) No, I can’t say as he should. But I reckon he
knows that. Now, I wouldn’t say he knows just what to believe and what not to.
But if he ever asked me, serious-like, I’d tell him.
Q. And Terrill? How did you meet him?
A. That was luck, if luck is something that happens, as to
which I’ve no firm opinion. His da took ill, and Terrill was one of the funeral
party as took him to the sea. I left Honnu’s village about the time they left
to head home again, and we got to talking on the road. A nice young fellow. On
the serious side, and tending to worry more than is comfortable for a youngster
his age. I did my bit to cheer him up, when I could.
Q. And how did Terrill and Honnu meet each other?
A. (chuckles) Well, I’ll maybe let you ask one of them about
that. I’d best be packing up and heading on, pretty soon. Any last questions?
Or might you be wanting something from the wagon before I go? I’ve got some
good knives I picked up a few towns back. Or if you’ve little ones at home, I
have toys -- balls for juggling, and these dolls. See the bits of shell that
make up the armor? And of course, I have fish. Always plenty of fish.
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Monday, September 24, 2018
Another excerpt from upcoming SF novel WATER TO WATER
Time for another short excerpt from my upcoming SF novel, Water to Water? Why not? After all, the book is now up for preorders on Amazon and elsewhere :-).
This one is from Chapter 2. Terrill, a young member of the Vushlu species who has just watched his father's death ritual, is on the way homeward.
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This one is from Chapter 2. Terrill, a young member of the Vushlu species who has just watched his father's death ritual, is on the way homeward.
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Terrill
should spend this time remembering his father, calling up all the memories he
wanted to preserve. What was his earliest memory of Da?
His
earliest memory of any kind . . . he would have liked a more pleasant one.
Someone had smacked his hand, on the unarmored palm, for making some mess or
other. But he couldn’t remember who had done it. It wouldn’t have been Da, not
for such a young child making a mess. Ma, maybe, in a moment of exasperation.
Or his uncle, visiting.
Terrill
might have been a couple of years older the time Da gave him a ride, telling
him to put his arms around Da’s torso and hold tight, Terrill’s baby legs
splayed wide across Da’s broad back. Da had put just a little bounce in his
gait, enough to be thrilling, but not enough to loosen Terrill’s clasped hands
. . . .
What
arose next was from a few years later, but still from childhood. A hot day, the
hottest so far that year, with the end of the season seeming forever away. Da
going from creek to creek to find the coolest one, and pouring a bucket of
almost-cold water all over Terrill, Terrill gasping in pleasure and relief . .
. .
Another
memory, very different, almost as far back: Terrill standing outside, watching
the sky colors shift from day to night, wondering if the sky looked the same
everywhere, even in the far-off cities where his older siblings wanted to go.
He had turned to go back inside and only then seen Da, walking back and forth,
slowly, in the road a few paces away, his shoulders slumped, a posture Terrill
could not remember having seen before. Something was wrong, and Terrill had no
idea what it was. He had never had the courage to ask about it.
He
would never know.
Friday, September 21, 2018
Excerpts from upcoming SF novel WATER TO WATER
My SF novel Water to Water is due out on October 17th, so it's high time I posted an excerpt.
Well, more than one, really. First, you'll need this bit from the Preface to understand the excerpts proper.
Nitpicky note (for all the excerpts): the formatting here is not identical to either the ebook's or the paperback's.
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When a Vushlu reaches the age of adulthood, its family, or if it has none, respected community members, take it to the ocean. Traditionally, it will never have been there before, unless its family catches sea creatures for a living. Often many families will travel together, a pilgrimage of celebration.
On its last day of life, a Vushlu swims out to sea, or if too weak to swim, wades in and lets the waves carry it. The ocean swallows its front legs, its rear legs, its back, its torso, its arms, its shoulders, and finally its head. Immersion in the water softens its living armor, its exoskeleton, until the plates sheet off and wash away, followed by the soft flesh within.
No Vushlu has ever returned to its home with this process incomplete. But Vushla splashed with seawater report no pain.
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Now for the first Actual Excerpt, a short one. This comes early in Chapter 1, and introduces us to Honnu, one of two major Vushla characters.
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Honnu squatted by the campfire, all four legs comfortably sunk in the sand, his lower armor sealed tight to keep sand out, and watched the procession approach the sea. It was a small group, with only one young Vushlu among the older ones. A funeral, then. The young one must be the son or daughter of the Vushlu, aging or ailing, whose funeral it was.
Honnu turned away before the group reached the edge of the water. He knew, of course, what would happen, but he had no wish to watch. After all, he lived with the ocean, lived from it, rode out every day to toss the nets and haul them back. He and his family depended on the ocean. But he often thought he must feel like a farmer with a very, very large and powerful bull. Such a useful animal — it sired strong beasts like itself, and it pulled plows through earth too sticky for pull-cycles. But it could, any time it chose to, trample the farmer into jelly. The farmer could hope that the bull would never turn on its master. Honnu lived with the certain knowledge that one day, the ocean would reveal itself as the largest possible beast, and devour him whole.
No, he had no need to watch it happen to others, not when he would be paddling the boat out again tomorrow morning.
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Here's one more excerpt, a longer one. It starts shortly after the first, and switches partway through from Honnu's POV to that of Kititit, a visiting peddler. (Kititit is a Weesah, not a Vushlu. The two species' anatomy differ substantially, a fact to which Honnu makes a passing reference.)
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The last taste of dinner was fading from Honnu’s mouth. Even food was different when the peddler came. This very night, around this same fire, they had roasted and eaten plump sausages spitting with juice, made from some crawling creature that pushed through underbrush and rooted in the earth of far-off forests.
Honnu stretched his arms and upper body to soak in the warmth of the fire, welcome as the end of hot season brought cooler night breezes. Which of the peddler’s tales might actually be true? Honnu had never traveled farther than the nearest market town — far enough away from the shore that the sea could not be seen, but not too far for its smell to carry, competing with the smell of the fish he sold and the pastries and spices and flowers in the stalls all around him. Were there really trees so tall that a Vushlu would have to rear back on its hind legs and lean against something sturdy in order to see the tops? Did mountains soar even higher? Did rivers of water pour out of those mountains? Did the mountains rise above the air itself, so that the air strained and grew thin, and one could look down and see the thicker air below? Did fountains of fire leap up from hidden places to consume travelers? Did birds, glowing as bright as any fire, swarm over the fields in springtime, keeping farmers from sowing seed until the birds had flown away? Did a species of giants, giants who never came near the ocean, giants with two legs and two arms like the Weesah but each limb twice as thick as a Weesah’s trunk, raise beasts for farmers, never leaving their ranches, requiring farmers to come to them? Were there places where the sky was always red, and others where the sky was always black?
Honnu’s family must know the answers to those questions, or to some of them, but his aunt never wanted to talk about it, and his grandfather changed his story from one time to the next, and his mother said none of it was true. Honnu refused to believe that.
Unless he found a way to go see for himself, he would never know.
Now he heard sounds of movement and conversation, and tires pushing through sand. The procession must be leaving, with one of its members gone forever into the sea. They would probably not go very far in the dark. There was an inn serving such travelers in the market town. But by morning, they would be on their way back to wherever they came from. To one of the many, many places Honnu had never seen.
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Kititit looked at different Vushla in turn as he told the story about buying a beast from a giant and tricking the fellow into lowering the price. The Vushla’s armor mostly left their faces bare, so you could see them drink the story in, especially the young ones. All right, maybe his mate’s uncle’s cousin wasn’t exactly a giant, but he was big enough that none of his neighbors gave him any backtalk. Kititit had come out of that exchange well enough to enjoy bragging about it, even if he did embellish the details a bit for effect.
It was a fine way to spend an evening. It would have been, even if the breeze hadn’t been a trifle nippy. He’d always liked campfires, but he particularly enjoyed them in villages like this. Vushlu armor wasn’t exactly reflective, but almost, enough to catch the firelight and play with it a bit. And while he always liked the smell of a campfire, it mingled especially nicely with the unique tangy smell of the sea. As for the traces of fish odor, he didn’t mind them. He did wonder, looking around at the Vushla, how much of it all they could smell with those small holes in their faces. His big mesh-covered nostrils had to do a better job, unless they somehow didn’t.
He caught the fisher lad’s eye for just a moment before the lad looked away. A bit shy, that one, but with thirsty ears, always soaking in whatever story Kititit chose to tell. Kititit’s oldest son had been like that, when he was a good bit younger. And when the boy and his sister had come with Kititit on his journeys, there had been plenty of time for telling tales.
Naturally the boy, or rather the proud young father, had started staying home now that he had a mate and little ones. And Kititit’s daughter, once proud to be included, had lately been more like willing. A good-hearted lass, ready to help her father in case he was too old and feeble to handle things alone; but it was time for her to live in the center of her own life, and Kititit to go back to how he used to travel, enjoying his own and the beast’s company.
Still, it was nice to have a youngster or two around the campfire.
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